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Cover and First page
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Lis Viggers

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Cover and First page

Ungelesener Beitragvon Lis Viggers » 03.08.2020, 12:02

Hello,

You have helped so many in this Forum and I hope you also can give me some help.

I'm creating a Photobook for my son and his family who this Summer have visited Copenhagen, Norway and France.

I think the cover is OK? But thr first page? Of course the example is ONLY an example.
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Kind regards
Lis
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Re: Cover and First page

Ungelesener Beitragvon MissVette » 03.08.2020, 15:14

Lis Viggers hat geschrieben:
Hello,

You have helped so many in this Forum and I hope you also can give me some help.

I'm creating a Photobook for my son and his family who this Summer have visited Copenhagen, Norway and France.

I think the cover is OK? But thr first page? Of course the example is ONLY an example.
Hi Lis
Long time that we have hear from you.

I like the cover but I dislike the first page especially the middle picture.
For me I do not seen any relation to Norge. This could be anywhere eg. Switzerland or Austria D:D
The 2nd thing I dislike is that you are using the same picture you used on the cover as well (same position).
And finally I dislike the background.

Let's see the opinion of the others.
Gruss
MissVette
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Re: Cover and First page

Ungelesener Beitragvon MissVette » 03.08.2020, 15:43

Here an example with a lighter background
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Re: Cover and First page

Ungelesener Beitragvon WAusi » 03.08.2020, 16:50

Hallo Lis, I would prefer a different design. The pictures are too much cropped. For example, in the left picture you can hardly see the little mermaid. She is the symbol of Copenhagen. I add some examples.
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Re: Cover and First page

Ungelesener Beitragvon okular » 03.08.2020, 20:04

Hello Lis,

I would not put the vacation destinations in brackets and i would not use the ampersand, especially because Norway and France are not related terms.

... and I miss the information which summer it is (Sommer 2020) D:winki:

So the text of the title could be:

Sommer 2020
Kobenhavn - Norge - Frankrig
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Re: Cover and First page

Ungelesener Beitragvon Lis V » 03.08.2020, 21:00

Thank you very much for all your remarks and suggestions, I really can use every Word D:winki:

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