[Lis Viggers]

Hello,

You have helped so many in this Forum and I hope you also can give me some help.

I'm creating a Photobook for my son and his family who this Summer have visited Copenhagen, Norway and France.

I think the cover is OK? But thr first page? Of course the example is ONLY an example.

[MissVette]

Lis Viggers hat geschrieben:

Hello,

You have helped so many in this Forum and I hope you also can give me some help.

I'm creating a Photobook for my son and his family who this Summer have visited Copenhagen, Norway and France.

I think the cover is OK? But thr first page? Of course the example is ONLY an example.

Hi Lis
Long time that we have hear from you.

I like the cover but I dislike the first page especially the middle picture.
For me I do not seen any relation to Norge. This could be anywhere eg. Switzerland or Austria
The 2nd thing I dislike is that you are using the same picture you used on the cover as well (same position).
And finally I dislike the background.

Let's see the opinion of the others.

[MissVette]

Here an example with a lighter background

[WAusi]

Hallo Lis, I would prefer a different design. The pictures are too much cropped. For example, in the left picture you can hardly see the little mermaid. She is the symbol of Copenhagen. I add some examples.

[okular]

Hello Lis,

I would not put the vacation destinations in brackets and i would not use the ampersand, especially because Norway and France are not related terms.

... and I miss the information which summer it is (Sommer 2020)

So the text of the title could be:

Sommer 2020
Kobenhavn - Norge - Frankrig

[Lis V]

Thank you very much for all your remarks and suggestions, I really can use every Word