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Lis Viggers

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Ungelesener Beitragvon Lis Viggers » 31.07.2019, 13:01

Hi,

I am making a Photobook for my son and his family who has been in Canada for a month. It is going very well, but now I have problems with this page and I ask for your help, please - layout and background.

The pictures on the left side is from one day/evening and the pictures to the right is from the next day. Do you think I should make doublepages - 1 doublepage with nature and 1 doublepage with snake?

Best regards
Lis Viggers
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Re: Help to a page

Ungelesener Beitragvon Lis Viggers » 31.07.2019, 14:36

Lis Viggers hat geschrieben:
Hi,

I am making a Photobook for my son and his family who has been in Canada for a month. It is going very well, but now I have problems with this page and I ask for your help, please - layout and background.

The pictures on the left side is from one day/evening and the pictures to the right is from the next day. Do you think I should make doublepages - 1 doublepage with nature and 1 doublepage with snake?

Best regards
Lis Viggers
Now I have made 2 pages: "Nature" is OK I think? But not "the snake-page"
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Ungelesener Beitragvon spica » 31.07.2019, 15:00

Dear Lis,

here some ideas for the snake page.

At first I would change the cutting of the pictures.
The one with the girl and the boy: There is a little something (?) down on the right sight, which I would eliminate. And I would zoom out again to see more of the girls foot (and boys head?).
The Snake in the bin (with the round shape): Here I would use a much bigger zoom to see more of the snake and less of the dirt on the sides of the bin.

In my opinion the three pictures seem not to be "enough" for a double page. May be you have any nice picture of the house, where your family stayed (may be from another day?), which you can combine on one page? So you will get a nice mood for the double page then?
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Spica
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Ungelesener Beitragvon WAusi » 01.08.2019, 22:13

Dear Lis,
I agree with spica50 and I am afraid that the pages you have posted are too empty, especially the second one. Why don't you use a background photo? D:oops:
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Ungelesener Beitragvon Lis Viggers » 02.08.2019, 13:05

Dear spica50 and WAusi,

Thank you so much for your help - I have been trying a dozen of times, with your suggestions in mind, and now I think the page is OK. I don't think it is a nicest page I have ever created - but OK D:-?

Again thank you for the help.
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