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Lis Viggers

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How can I make this page nicer?

Ungelesener Beitragvon Lis Viggers » 26.12.2018, 17:56

Hello,

I am making a photobook with pictures from shorttrips in 2018. I think this page is a little "boring" |D:down: Do you have suggestions to make it nicer?
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Lis
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Re: How can I make this page nicer?

Ungelesener Beitragvon DSL-schnell » 26.12.2018, 21:13

Lis Viggers hat geschrieben:
: Do you have suggestions to make it nicer?
Hi Lis,
I think, it depends on the other pages.
In my opinion it would be nicer to places the headline not in the middle. I would place it left.
And maybe don´t use the oval border around.
Gruß DSL-schnell
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Re: How can I make this page nicer?

Ungelesener Beitragvon cracde » 26.12.2018, 21:36

Dear Lis,
I'm not one of the layout experts here but perhaps I can start with some basic questions/things:
1) Is it really only one picture that you want to show for every place? I usually try to have a double page (or more) for every place - if possible, a general view and some details.
2) I know that some of the experts always argue against placing a picture in the middle of two pages, i. e. over the fold, even if it has lay-flat binding.
3) If you want to have the pages as they are, I would add a picture (going from the very top to the very bottom, perhaps with a Verlauf (no idea what that is in Englisch, sorry!) in the form of a quarter of a circle) with about 80% or so transparency on both sides such as a tree reaching in from the left (covering one third/one half of the first page) and something similar on the right page.
However, I'm sure the real experts will have better ideas and suggestions.

PS: Oops! Did I really take so long to write this answer? Someone was quicker!
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
cracde
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Re: How can I make this page nicer?

Ungelesener Beitragvon grasmuecke » 26.12.2018, 22:10

If I had read the other posts before I would not have done this layout. As its all ready now I post it nevertheless. I very much agree with what they say.
 
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Re: How can I make this page nicer?

Ungelesener Beitragvon Lis Viggers » 27.12.2018, 17:35

Thank you for your answers.

The pages is a sort of ”frontpage” for my photoes from our tour to Bad Iburg, Osnabrück and Münster. But after having read your answers I thought if I need this page at all because there are photoes from each town – and the castles.

On the other hand I like your suggestion cracde!!!! C:-? C:-? C:-? C:-?
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Re: How can I make this page nicer?

Ungelesener Beitragvon pitty » 28.12.2018, 09:24

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Dear Lis Viggers,

Is there a missing n in the word Münster in your caption?
Lieber Gruß, pitty
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Re: How can I make this page nicer?

Ungelesener Beitragvon Lis Viggers » 29.12.2018, 12:41

pitty hat geschrieben:
Dear Lis Viggers,

Is there a missing n in the word Münster in your caption?
Dear Pitty

Thank you D:winki: (and when i changed this I saw I had written Osnabruck wirh an "e"!!!)
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